深圳雅思英语怎么提升-雅思英语写作提升的方法

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

深圳雅思英语怎么提升?提升雅思我们首先会关注到以下这些问题:

* 举例冗长,足足花了约60个单词,结果就是,段落重心偏移至这个"小

故事"上,而不是例子前的分论点,例子就失去了它作为论证证据的作用;

* 措辞口语化,选词随意;

* 表述模糊,包括a lot of aspects, a specific environment等。

解析:

* 信息浓缩,丰富语义,让例子核心信息成为句子的主干:acquiring 

English enables them to continue tertiary education,这样语义丰

富的一个长句子印证前面的观点;

* 信息浓缩,"写论文、和导师讨论专业问题、参加社会活动"等一系列

流水账式的内容,改写为"English has become the major language of 

monograph and academic forum";

* 选词,词汇的选取要避免口语化,词义要;

* set up for 为…作准备

* acquire习得

* enable 使能够

* tertiary education *教育

* monograph 专著

* academic forum 学术讲座